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The Exorcist

Tinseled reflexives....

Emitting from this oblong box

As manifest projections

Exploding in reversions sky ~

Stardust as dreamfuls walking through 

This clearing, of magicals illusions....

Knocking upon fates hinged door

To dust away these breathless webs

Sweeping out the silence upon

Reveilles inverted request....

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...."The Exorcist" ~

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  1. Date: 5/10/2012 6:53:00 PM

    Amazing one. I agree slightly with cindy's comment about the imagery. Every word is perfect in its way though. :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 3:20:00 PM

    I like the line "knocking upon fates hinged door"..It is two sided isn't it ..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work..Sara

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 4:17:00 PM

    Awesome write John, hugs vie