Jack's Pact by Deborah Burch

harry horsman

Date: 5/14/2012 12:53:00 AM

great limericks, and good advice. good luck. harry

Joseph May

Date: 5/13/2012 6:05:00 PM

very nice limerick Deb...always..Joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2012 5:44:00 PM

Cute one..Good lesson that you have taught..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2012 9:51:00 AM

GREAT advice in your fun limerick. Good luck in the contest, sweetie.

Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 1:28:00 PM

lol, thank you Andrea...your encouragement is so helpful and means a great deal to me! Big Congrats on all your fab wins, girl!! Awsome job!! love ya , deb

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 5/8/2012 5:21:00 PM

cute one Deborah... winners list posted and my book is being edited right now .. needed to add 20 more poems to content .. will let u know when fully available probably late Summer or early Fall... see my latest post and come visit me at WN..luv..

Deborah Burch Date: 5/12/2012 1:25:00 PM

Thank you LindaMarie :) miss you!! thanks for my win!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !! hope to see you soon on WN look for Annabellee ;) big hugs love ya deb

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/8/2012 3:38:00 PM

I think your write is fabulous, fascinating, and fantastic! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 4:42:00 PM

cool avitar!! :)

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 4:41:00 PM

:) thank you Russell! I always enjoy your encouragement!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/8/2012 1:09:00 PM

Love it debs xx

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 4:43:00 PM

Thank you ~GG~ Sooo glad you're back!! :)

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2012 12:48:00 PM

Deborah, it is good to read something you can smile a little bit of - like it alot, and hope for a win for you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 4:45:00 PM

lol..thank you Anne Lisse! you are sooooo kind..big hugs, love ya deb

SCRIBE ML

Date: 5/8/2012 12:20:00 PM

big picture scenario BOO.....you took a funny form and intensified by 1000 degrees...i should've, just said, this is HOT! gotta get me one of those soup hot stamps!

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 4:46:00 PM

LOL...too funny...thanks boo...:)

Gail Angel Doyle

Date: 5/8/2012 12:06:00 PM

Deborah, I love your poem!! Great job!! Hugs and love, Gail

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 4:44:00 PM

Thank you Gail...:)

Chris D. Aechtner

Date: 5/8/2012 11:43:00 AM

Neat take on Paula's "pact" contest, Deborah. Yeah, the problem with not making pacts, is that evil can wear angelic wings....can get quite confusing! Best wishes in the contest!

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 11:50:00 AM

So very true Chris...thank you so much...

John Rhinem

Date: 5/8/2012 11:28:00 AM

Smile ˜ What's Up Sweeet Snoopy Girl * As Reading Your Beauties First Stanza The Thought Witch Popped Into My Head Was, And They Lived Happily Ever After ˜ Hahahaha, Yet Upon The End Of Your Treasures Final Verse, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Deborah * Even I Myself Believe & Know That Lucifer Wasn't Always A Bad Apple; Perhaps Somehow Someway, He Can Find This Day As The Prodigal Child, His Place In The Sun * My Love, Forever; John!:) *

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 11:43:00 AM

Thank you John :)
Date: 5/8/2012 11:34:00 AM

* . . "?PERHAPS?" . . *

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/8/2012 11:13:00 AM

There is a moral in this story (or perhaps an immoral...) In either case, funny... Terry

Deborah Burch Date: 5/8/2012 11:19:00 AM

LOL...indeed, Terry, but I left a lot for the reader ...lol --Thank you so much, big hugs, love deb

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