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fighters

the fighters emerge
one has a trident and net
the other a sword and shield
looking for chances
they circle one another
the net man traps and stabs – death

for Amy’s chokehold choka contest

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  1. Date: 6/7/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the Amy's contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 8:39:00 PM

    HI, Jack. Nice to see you on the list here with me today. congrats on your win. I sure remember this one!

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:02:00 PM

    JACK Congratulations with your wonderful win, In AMY GREEN'S contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 6:24:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/10/2012 9:15:00 PM

    lmao@this winner...Patrick

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Jack, you did nicely with this one. maybe I can give it a try when I lay out in the sun today. I hope to finish here in an hour so I can do that!!!

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 4:15:00 PM

    Good one..Got a laugh..Thanks for stopping by my Chocolate work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 12:22:00 PM

    A pleasure to read your poetry today Jack and I wish you the best in the contest. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol