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should i live or die

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should i live or die

As a tear rolls down i dont make a sound 
i stay still i think what do i do
do i live do i die do i cry 
do i go on living this lie 
the lie i say all the time,that im okay , im fine, im happy 
but really in side im dieing 
every day i hear people say your ugly, your  weird, the rate on how pretty you are is 0 or 2, why dont you just die
life should be precous, should be fun but all it does is bring pain and sorrow 
im sitting here with a knife in my hand thinking what to do
do i keep feeling pain and cry every day 
do i stay and get called ugly and stupid and get treated like *****
or should i just end it now 
im allways getting teased and made fun of all the time 
maybe its time to end it all 
is life really worth living?

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 11:47:00 AM
    A pleasure to read your poetry today Diann. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 1:47:00 AM
    Our value and beauty is not based on the opinion of others (thank the Lord)...and mirrors are deceiving...our reflection comes from within...as 'Forrest Gump's' mama would say 'beauty is as beauty does'...writers write, so keep writing sweetie!! (tx for the SM, I sent you a reply) Big Hugs, love ya, deb...the pain will stop...

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 12:30:00 AM
    Diann you keep writing, well done..David

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:52:00 PM
    Yes.... It gets better. The stumbling blocks, makes the victory better; it becomes liberating! Stay on your feet in order to cross the finish line. You have to promise yourself, and me that. You have a friend in me I promise! My God Daughter! Think good, feel good.

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    Date: 5/7/2012 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're BEAUTIFUL, NOW BELIEVE IT!