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I Just Can't Win

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Below is the poem entitled I Just Can't Win which was written by poet Lily Mayfield. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I Just Can't Win

Will I ever get it right
You shove it all in my face
All day and all night
My mistakes I can't erase

Up is down
Black is white
I'm not allowed to frown
I'm not allowed to fight

I slip 
I fall
I trip
I crawl

I try so hard
Only to fall flat
My body is scarred 
From when the blood spat

We've had this chat
I have to begin again
I feel like a rat
I just can't win

*Written on May 7, 2012 by Lily Mayfield*

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 5:18:00 AM
    The best to you in the contest Lily. Love, Carol

    Mayfield Avatar Lily Mayfield
    Date: 5/8/2012 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Carol! :) - Lily <3