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Dancing Waters

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Dancing Waters

 
On dancing waters I saw wet dreams on dancing waters I was born to believe on dancing waters I lived but could not breathe on dancing waters I learned but did not know a single thing on dancing waters I sold my very being on dancing waters I thought, one day I shall swim free on dancing waters I die as my heart bleeds and my dancing waters so beautifully seen do not gleam dancing waters now motionless removing all dreams hope in dancing waters I still try to pray for them but the dance ended with me only to begin anew all over again

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  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Those dancing waters which turns to motionless to dance again in a tomorrow... when you dance again.Very profound poem dear-Charma

    Baxly Avatar Dee Baxly
    Date: 5/7/2012 9:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charma. I know they will but it is so hard when they stop. :-) Thank you for reading. xoxoxox, Red
  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:27:00 AM
    i meant turn..sorry for the typo

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 2:01:00 AM
    I love this poem,Its very soothingly written.Superb write ......Elliott...xoxo....

    Baxly Avatar Dee Baxly
    Date: 5/7/2012 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Elliot. I am trying some things I haven't done before, so they aren't my best. First I have to actually master the for. lol They rhyme somewhat and I am usually free verse so this is all new to me. I am trying though. :-). lol I have no idea what they end up as, just what I intended them to be. lol :-)
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 5:19:00 PM
    good poem it gets a 6 :-)

    Baxly Avatar Dee Baxly
    Date: 5/6/2012 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL I think a 2, but thank you.