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The Calling of Hades at the Games

Shield and sword in hand
 Broken legs, a quill of plan
   Praying to die as real men
    Hades calls to all
     Free men kill for coin and fame
      Energized audience bays.

Crushed skulls see no more
 Extend hand to dying friend
  Glory sought- life’s bitter end
   Cheering crowd - no grief
Spartacus, Oenomaus
      Refuse to see his brother +
   
       Die in sh** and shame--       
Fragmented parts bleed in sand
  Detached eyes taken to wing
   The crowds dance and sing
    Two champions form a bond
      Clanking steel, new language formed

Together they fight
 Clashing with Devils, winning
  Hoping honorable death
   Each sees to his friend
    Promises made for their death
     Both grasp knowledge of his end.



A. Green

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  1. Date: 5/9/2012 1:40:00 PM

    I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Amy. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 1:48:00 PM

    Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:13:00 AM

    wow, this is SO GOOD. but hey, this is your contest, isn't it? Gosh, I hope we can measure up to this example!!!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 2:03:00 AM

    i like this. Amy, again one is drawn to each word, such action, in this historic poem, one of good over evil. harry

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 3:20:00 PM

    I agree I love the form... and many thanks for the high placement in your contest.. luv n hugs Michael

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 1:14:00 PM

    Yours is the first choka form I have seen used. I am glad you posted it here. I look forward to reading more of your poems.