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Deep Waters

Knowing defeat I now softly sleep my arms are lighter and feet do not tread deep waters My brain rest from spirits for the time being I do not fight that loss of control and shut my eyes and no man nor beast removes me from who I am I close the gates to my home away from all this life I have reclaimed to be solely mine walking a closer walk with God and his Son I mend my circles and close off my heart from the world peace showers down upon my head I will remember the dead the sacrifices they made for me to live and softly cry all alone

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  1. Date: 5/6/2012 3:21:00 PM

    Hey there Danielle, quite an emotive write you have here.. Hope you enjoy being on the soup ;) tc Wilma

    Baxter Avatar Danielle Wise Baxter Date: 5/6/2012 3:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Wilma. Yes, I am enjoying myself. Everyone is very nice. xoxoxoxox, Red
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 12:04:00 PM

    Another pivoting emotional write Danielle, your poetry never falls short of my expectation, luv vie

    Baxter Avatar Danielle Wise Baxter Date: 5/6/2012 1:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vie. :)