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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/25/2012 4:54:00 PM

You have looked into the eyes of death in this well written and well rhymed poem. Very chivalrous of you. I admire your boldness. Thanks for visiting my Haiku Buried Heart and for your kind comments.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/10/2012 11:14:00 AM

Thanks..wow..you certainly can hold your spirits..I played off his example and I believe he did show slurred speach? Anyway, you wrote a good write drunk or sober [I am loopy on 1 glass of merlot into which I put a FULL glass of ice LOL no capacity here!] Light & Love

Date: 5/10/2012 6:19:00 AM

You do not sound drunk above unless on too much reading of 'holy books?' Many one more verse? Rise I [OK you do not get to write baffling and not tell me why! on [The Shores of Bombay] Posedin is the Greek god of the Sea..Aphrodite the greek Goddess of love..2 shipwrecked people fall in love make a home of sand with scraps from the sea and have kids..plain simple..not baffling at all BUT you tell me what baffled you ..please..with sugar and I will go fix the write!] HUGS Light & Love

Syed Amaan Ahmad Date: 5/10/2012 8:56:00 AM

Okay before/after you read my reply over there, I wonder how "deprived" was "elusive" ;) hugs/peace/sunlight, moonlight, etc.

Syed Amaan Ahmad Date: 5/10/2012 8:24:00 AM

The reply is on one of your poems since characters were limited to 400 here, and they are 500 characters. Love and hugs and so many lights ;)

Ruben O.

Date: 5/9/2012 11:19:00 PM

It's nice to see you posting, my friend! What an interesting write! "Whimper not, as I set on thy door,/Where then all yield, each lore—"!! Great lines, Amaan! Have a nice night/day! Ruben.

Syed Amaan Ahmad Date: 5/9/2012 11:26:00 PM

Thanks buddy, glad you liked it ;)

Yesha Shah

Date: 5/9/2012 12:49:00 AM

An intense poem, wonderful usage of vocab. Like it.

David Williams

Date: 5/6/2012 1:30:00 PM

Syed good words..David

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/6/2012 7:38:00 AM

A bold poem, challenging death but not too dark. I like the rhyme pattern you used.

Syed Amaan Ahmad Date: 5/6/2012 8:03:00 AM

How do you define "too dark"? or even "dark"?

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