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Getting Serious

I wonder: 
Can I look into your eyes and mean it 
when I say that knowing you 
will make me never long for another?

Let me say (instead?): 
There is (with you) a greater degree 
of contentment and commitment 
than I have ever allowed or enjoyed.

I could say: 
My love for you is focused as logic, 
giddy as champagne, warm as a hot tub 
and bright and burning as a laser.

More honestly: 
The strain of love’s a medley of changes – 
no lullaby, but a rising, swelling dedication, 
that bridges to an unwavering march.

Surrounded by elaborate and colorful pageantry
that winds a route completely impromptu
for which we are totally unrehearsed,
our hearts, drumming within the cavalcade,
synchronize to the parade’s harmony,
while we hold each other in steadfast step.

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  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:24:00 AM

    Wow James...love this poem and how you have presented it. Well done!

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 7:38:00 PM

    Smile ˜ I Love This Completely & Yessss, Getting Quite Serious * My Love, Forever, John!:) ˜

     Avatar Date: 5/1/2012 7:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ...."An Intense Favourite In Sheer Heartfelt Beauty." *