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lost inside me

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lost inside me

it  was  forbidden ,  a  time  inside  that  the  visions had  forsaken  me  ,  and all i had  left  was  the  lost  inside ,  feelings  that  had  drown, and  i could  not  hide  , was  it  easier  to  comitt  a  suiside  to  run  from the  truth  all   around  you ,  like a tree  that  needs  a new  branch should i live  and  just  take  a  chance  sing  songs  and  have  a dance.  laugh  cry  im about  to  die  .

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  1. Date: 5/1/2012 2:24:00 PM

    Smile ~ Shall i take it in stride, close my eyes, walk on by ~ Venus & Mars ~ My love to You, John!:) ~

    smith Avatar rochelle smith Date: 5/1/2012 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    AW NICE TY
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 2:22:00 PM

    the last line say's so much. strong write.

    smith Avatar rochelle smith Date: 5/1/2012 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    YS IM GLAD U LIKE IT