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The Greatest Creation

It was love at first sight most vivid description  
Gift from above but this ain’t Christmas

Just a sweet conversation turned into you

Son it was written

Malice to eat ya but ya moms sweet chariot
Daddy tripping off ya light
Little man you’re heaven sent

No matter the destination 
I’ll be there for you you’re my marathon to Asia

You shall receive the highest glory because your so holy

God’s gift I know they wished they prayed more

Don’t thank me that just what flames for

Bullets thrown, with a bullet vest
Praise of thanksgiving I know its hard for them to digest
 
You know I’ll die for you 
The greatest creation is you


Back from church
I didn’t need some healing

To thank the lord for a blessing
He once felt that feeling

Forget model planes
I’ll built you a phantom

I can’t wait to hold you
Cuz Imma hold you for ransom

Sadness and empty bottles
Seems easier cuz words can be hard to swallow

You’re my question if I got answers

You can turn a whole funeral  into dancers

If you could count my blessing in roman numerals
It would Be I
Cuz I love you like you’re my only one

Papa’s not a killer
But this kingdom rest like a Iron Rod

I going out in a bang
A father always keep his son name where his heart stays

I’ll darken the skies for you
The greatest creation is you  
 

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  1. Date: 12/18/2012 3:50:00 PM

    Love the gift you endure with all your soul... my kids are more than anyone will ever know .... i love it when you answer the unknown question... "You’re my question if I got answers" that line impresses me. Good ending... xox~pd

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Hi Chris,,,Yeah, I do enjoy writing about politics...u still have to read my nutty verses no matter what political affiliation you are! haha...I have written a few about Palin bc of her electricity with the media..Whether you like her or not, you gotta admit, she's got moxsy!...I am glad you are back after being away for 2 yrs..and yes,,,your language is as clean as an altar boy! hahah,,,keep em coming, friend! Glad I stopped by to read your work today! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 2:47:00 AM

    I read thru this one thrice! In Roman numerals that would be III! ha ha...This is some kind of song...and I can only imagine the rippin rappin beat! Great lyrics for a special treat! :) The girl u gave a five! lol....

    Wallach Avatar Christopher Allen Wallach Date: 5/5/2012 3:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thanks its hard for men to write str8 poem i was on this site bout 2 years ago and i wud write nothing but horrible raps lol yea they were pretty bad i'm tryna clean up my language and write them in a more poetic form