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Terry L. Allen
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Mint Green Trees
white Egret in flight mint green trees surround lily pond in soft morning mist.
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Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 5/1/2012 10:56:00 AM
Lovely imagery in this haiku, Terry. The juxtaposition between the Egret and misty pond is nice and smooth. I am going to find that poem you mentioned in your last comment on my "Soup Nazi" write. P.S. - I am not a seasoned poet at all. Quite the amateur, actually.
Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Chris for your compliment on my work and your kindness to review. I have been studying Haiku and am trying to perfect my writing of them. The poem I mentioned was "Vocabular Extroardinar" TLee
Deborah Burch
Date: 5/1/2012 8:10:00 AM
Very tasty Haiku TLee :) love the visual...big hugs,love ya~deb
Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 8:34:00 AM
Hi there lady. Thanks for the praise. warm hugs and love ya too May the tree of eternal hope spring up in your yard TLee
nette onclaud
Date: 5/1/2012 5:50:00 AM
fascinating use of 'ku form, terry... cheers and huggs!:)
Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 6:26:00 AM
Nette I am still learning. Charles Henderson is trying to teach me the proper way to do it. Give me time I'll get there. Thanks for your kind words and kindness to review. May soft winds bring a world of beauty to your door. TLee
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2012 2:47:00 AM
Beautiful Terry, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 3:35:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise. I am working on perfecting this but I am still pretty new at it. So glad you enjoyed it. Huggs TLee
Terry O'Leary
Date: 5/1/2012 2:37:00 AM
Wonderful! Terry
Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/1/2012 3:39:00 AM
Hey Terry thanks for stopping by and your kind review. Are you ready to take the plunge yet with a Haiku ? (smile) We will help I promise. A warm hug for you. TLee
