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why cnt you say ur proud of me

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why cnt you say ur proud of me

i give up on trying to please you 
i do whatevr you tell me to do
all i want is for you to say is 4 words 
ill never be good enuff 2 you 
i try my hardest to please you and all i want is you to tell me 4 words 
i guess im not good enuff for you 
dad all i want is for you to say your proud of me  is that to much to ask
you tell your girlfriends daughter that your roud of her for her girl scouts 
but my whole 17 years of liveing you have never told me your proud of me
i do all i can to please you i try to be the best daughter i can be but i guess ill never be good enuff for you 
ALL I WANT IS FOR YOU TO SAY YOUR PROUD OF ME!!!

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  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:47:00 PM
    this is sad and has very deep feelings. It shows the hurt and pain that you feel. You are not alone. Jesus loves you. He will carry you through all this. Many blessings. Lucilla

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    Date: 4/30/2012 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you