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Lumens

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Lumens

Irradiated in corner rooms; they talk in sun drenched whispers,
Neath the sullen pines they lurk among the void
Hope
Less
This varies, but they see the light shining down; touch forehead, look down.
Assuage the lot of them fears,
Pray
More
This varies, but they see the light of his crown; the absolute, the unknown
Who knows a lot of their fears,
Affliction
Lit fire burns those left behind.
Peace

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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 10:18:00 AM

    Thse single words between the lines are like exclamation marks and really underscore what you are saying Tim. I really enjoyed how you did this!

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:10:00 PM

    this has an enchanting simplicity. The line breaks are interesting, and the tone beautifully consistent... way to go, tim!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 3:27:00 PM

    This varies, but they see the light of his crown...Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 3:27:00 AM

    Beautiful and powerful poem, enjoyed nicely. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:22:00 AM

    Hope, less, pray and peace ....all in one poem, well written Tim. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:02:00 AM

    Well written dear poet.My favorite line is the following:Assuage the lot of them fears,Pray More Superb !!!