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i ride my bike

i ride my bike - -
my father lets go
and i fall

for gwendolen's bike contest

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  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:39:00 PM

    hahahaha. I would give this one a placement for sure, oh master of the fast poem!

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 12:45:00 AM

    Well written dear poet.I enjoyed this much.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:48:00 PM

    In these few words you have sketched those sweet beautiful memories of childhood which very seldom come on the surface. Great and magnificently written Haiku, which is likely to touch almost every mind. Superb. My good wishes for your contest entry.…Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Jack H

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:54:00 PM

    WOW... I think,,, this contest... brought that memory.. where we fall... this one a delighted poem... thank you and good luck...pd

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Good luck,

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:22:00 PM

    This is a magnificent poem my friend! I love the last line, "and i fall" that's exactly what happens when you are a child and you are just starting to ride a bike...and trying to learn exactly how to ride a bike...by yourself! This is a perfect interpretation of the contest! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Brings memories from my youth and my children's ...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:30:00 PM

    (Laugh!!).. A loving memory Jack!! Thanks for the reminder!!..Love Diana

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:38:00 PM

    LOL I guess lots of us had a similar experience, Jack. So cute! Winning wishes for Gwen's contest. Love, Carolyn