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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 5:28:00 AM
    so much to ponderr here Marlon, your pen and the mind that drives it are so powerful, and a joy to witness,

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:57:00 AM
    "hard-headed knees" great phrase...

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:39:00 AM
    Hey Scribe.... great work... congratulations on your feature... just passing by...

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Hello Scribe, stopping by to congratulate you with your featured poem of the week... love it still...pd

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 10:07:00 AM
    Enjoyed your images, very nicely penned. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:29:00 PM
    Good one. I'll havetah read the 2nd part. The longer one I bet, which is fine really xD. -DWB

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 5:25:00 PM
    yes, this is very interesting. Loved the images!! Let me go see the next one.

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 1:21:00 PM
    Such interesting work -- will be reading part 2 Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 10:00:00 PM
    WOW! I'm gonna get a hold of the emotion that sparked here... and read the second part... always..pd

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Marlon, you speak of faith and the love of God in ways more eloquently than I can hope to achieve, keep on preaching. I believe that God calls us to do his works in all places, and poetry is a very divine and inspirational way to reach the hearts of many. Thanks for sharing, and for your kind words on my poetry.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:47:00 PM
    Wonderful poem dear poet.Thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:36:00 PM
    Lovely Marlon...Touched me on the in side!! Beautiful... Love Diana

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Ah yessss, I am caught and need to move on to part two.........

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:19:00 AM
    Scribe, oohh Propofol cocktails, mustard seed of faith, cool and strong words..David

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:13:00 AM
    there is sadness, love, faith, and struggles in this one. Very nice poem, Marlon. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 6:55:00 AM
    I like number one....over for number two...- Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 5:17:00 AM
    Excellent!!!!! Now for page 2. Michael.

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 10:58:00 PM
    Fantastic writing Scribster keep me coming....Patrick

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:19:00 PM
    This is one good write. I like your nlast stanza. If your faith is only as big as a mustard seed, sometimes that is all you need. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:09:00 PM
    Great Title, for a deep expressed story poem,Thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Erich