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Ain't What She Used to BE

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Ain't What She Used to BE


                                                  tips for old gray mare
                                               the saddle is now heavy
                                              smorgasboards are great

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  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:06:00 AM
    I liked it Terry, I think the title is just fine with the haiku, I think the title should be anything you want it to be, enjoyed stopping in on your poetry keep up the good writes luv vie

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 5/2/2012 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vienna and so glad you liked it. I was in a rare mood of funny when I wrote this and was just having fun. May happiness be your best friend. TLee
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 11:46:00 PM
    thats cute, I have not had much time for the Soup lately , trying to get a few poems read tonight, yours among them

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 4/29/2012 12:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was just having a bit of fun last night. Life has been a bit taxing here lately and I have had alot to deal with so I guess I just needed to cut loose a bit. Glad you enjoyed it and glad to hear from you. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:31:00 PM
    Haha....enjoyed the fun...:)

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 4/28/2012 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was in a silly mood yesterday I'm not sure why but I guess I needed a laugh. I'll be good now and get back to the seriousness of writing Haiku. It's been a rough month and I guess I was making lemonaid. Smile while you can you never know what tomorrow will bring. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:37:00 AM
    lol...well written dear poet!!!

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 4/28/2012 1:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Just havin a bit of fun. Glad you could join in and catch a laugh Elliott Here's hoping you catch a smile and can't get rid of it. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 10:40:00 PM
    Ha ha ha!!! Lol..too cute..you do have a good sense of humor as well..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 4/27/2012 10:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And would you believe that I can't drink alcohol because of sugar. I don't know what got into me tonight. Glad it gave you a chuckle. Huggs TLee
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 10:38:00 PM
    Baaahahhahahahahah!!!!!! ok go sit in the corner! LOL tooo funny!! Burlesque Senryu! lol love it!! big hugs,love~ deb

    Allen Avatar Terry L. Allen
    Date: 4/27/2012 10:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh My Word I don't know what got into me tonight. I have sugar so it wasn't alcohol. I thought you would get a laugh out of it. I wonder what Charles will think of it? Lots of love from the old gray mare TLee