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  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:22:00 PM
    Heartbreak is palpable. You CAN hear and feel its effects. Great couplet rhyming and cadence! :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 1:13:00 PM sad...Lisa - Wish you all the best. Hope for a new and happy week. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:48:00 PM
    Lisa, very sad, very beautiful..David

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:43:00 AM
    Dear Poetess Lisa a sad yearning vista It will all come right with the new morning's light May God hold you warm in His Arms tonight.

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 11:37:00 PM
    sorrowful words,However very well written.

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 8:16:00 PM
    Smile ˜ Lisa, Sweet Lisa, Come Here Baby, Smoochie Smoo Smoo, My Sweet Love ˜ Always, John!:) ˜

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 5:49:00 PM
    This is truly sad- a broken heart is so tender and should be held so gently- love and blessings, Bren

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 5:37:00 PM
    Very heart breaking write... luv Michael

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 5:32:00 PM
    Wow, this sounds just like me some nights. hope you are OK.