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Future Running Counterclockwise

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Future Running Counterclockwise


An Acrostanka...or Tankrostic! 



                                        Each tick of the clock
                                        Accelerates neglection
                                        Reducing the time
                                        The future would last few hours:
                                        Human's punctuality







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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 7:26:00 PM
    Good one!! If we write from bed we won't [or will?] over heat and add to the heat index! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 12:26:00 PM
    I love this acrostic/tanka!!! Very well said. Tanya and Thanks for your greeting and comments!

  1. Date: 5/20/2012 10:58:00 AM
    So clever Ruben..love your work indeed!! always an honor for you and other successful poets to view my work..Thank you for all your assistance...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 5:14:00 PM
    Enjoyed readng your creative work..Congrats on your win and idea for conserving.Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Beautiful piece of poetry,Ruben.Congratulations on your win....

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 8:41:00 PM
    glad to see this succinct acrostic on the winners' list, Ruben. How goes it this friday evening for you? Congrats here!

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Beyond Earth Hour" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 3:36:00 AM
    Ruben congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 3:06:00 AM
    sounds pretty ticking good, poetry flow is clock like would, if the words come galvanising...

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 10:11:00 AM
    nice combo of forms - have you seen the movie "in time" w/justin timberlake? this reminds me of that, even though you're referring to the earth's time running out and not people's. i like the clock image :)

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 7:40:00 PM
    You are always an orginal!! Love the simplicity of this....not to mention the two-fold form. Nikko will too! And by the way, what a great friend you are to show up and check out so many of my poems....I spent the evening smiling! Thank you, Ruben...you are awesome and kind!

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 4:11:00 PM
    Like your thinking here Ruben; and thanks for the comment and considering entering my competition..."

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 9:05:00 AM
    Much said about Our mother earth Ruben.. and so true.. Glad to read this post from you..Charma

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 6:09:00 PM
    Wonderful Ruben, not just the layout but the words, and thanks for all your great comments on my poetry

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 4:42:00 PM
    Good idea..I stay at home more now at least until the last two weeks because gas is so high that I can't afford to go..Last two weeks have had to go to chiropractor for treatment to try to get easy...Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

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    Date: 5/4/2012 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Clever combination of two poetic forms..Sara
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Hey I work OUT OF my HOUSE..maybe my legs with atrophy? grrrrrr Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 2:17:00 PM
    I like this Ruben and obviously Missy will dig the form/s you used to bring your message across.. enjoy the weekend ahead *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Ruben, I love the poem. David

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:45:00 AM
    there is much truth here Ruben, love the way you have structuured this. harry

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 9:16:00 AM
    um message incomplete retry? abort? fail?

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