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Forgiven 21

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Forgiven 21




A conscience; telling me to walk not;
But, temptation over powered.
Not listening to my mind,
sin took its course again.
Father, "FORGIVE me,
for this is the 
twenty-first
time with
her."


Pace, G
04-25-2012

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 1:45:00 PM
    Nice. Makes me want to hear the rest of the story.

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 12:51:00 AM
    nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 9:55:00 PM
    if it sounds like fun, why don't you join,,, what????? you can't produce a nice wet kissing poem for my contest.... never mind you don't seem like the challenging kind of man... you only write for you,,,,,xox~ pd

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    Date: 8/18/2012 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lmao!!
  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:24:00 PM
    Alright now...no 22nd time lol!! JK! I enjoyed your nonet!! I can dig it!

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    Date: 8/18/2012 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Doreen, thank you!!! Lmao!!
  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:07:00 AM
    A powerful habit to break is the intense connection with the wrong person. You opened my eyes with a good laugh.

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    Date: 8/18/2012 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..thanks Jennifer!! :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Hi Pace yeah forgivness is something we could all do with from time to time good write, all the best Owen

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    Date: 6/4/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, thank you for stopping by!! A pleasure seeing you..always!! Hugs
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 6:21:00 AM
    aww lovley verse, I know the bible says we should forgive not 77 times but 77 times 7 and ekep multiplying it, wellw ritten and thanks for your kind comments. God bless you from diane

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    Date: 6/4/2012 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so kindly Diane!!! Love your comment!!
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 11:55:00 PM
    love the passion in your pen, amongst all else.... Carma

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    Date: 6/2/2012 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you as I love your passion in your work as well Carma!!
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:23:00 AM
    Prayer is only way to recover, nice truth, Loved always, bl

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    Date: 6/2/2012 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sir..sorry!!
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    Date: 5/6/2012 9:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you madam always!!!
  1. Date: 5/6/2012 8:28:00 AM
    Standing ovation!

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    Date: 5/6/2012 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you maam for stopping by!
  1. Date: 5/3/2012 9:40:00 PM
    LOL! U know this was great... I really enjoy ur work. I got a good smile from this one.. I really liked it's form as well.

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    Date: 5/4/2012 4:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...yeah trying to be different..all smiles
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 6:04:00 PM
    Got a chuckle..Sara

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    Date: 5/1/2012 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...cute
  1. Date: 4/26/2012 5:37:00 PM
    Well, at least you're counting...

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    Date: 4/30/2012 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol!! I just needed a two syllable number so I used twenty-one..lol Only to make a point that no matter how many times you fall its not too late to get back up.
  1. Date: 4/26/2012 3:03:00 PM
    I enjoyed this nonet. Hmmm, maybe it's time for an engagement ring!!! (from my christian point of view, I think you really like her a lot!)

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    Date: 4/26/2012 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol..I can't even reply to your comment from falling on the floor laughing. I was just trying to speak the mind of other guys who may have felt like this once before. I'm not ready for marrage just yet. smiles..hugs
  1. Date: 4/26/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Good my friend,( dont miss my last one too).Smile !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

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    Date: 4/26/2012 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I won't sweetheart!!! Thank you for stopping by. hugs smile
  1. Date: 4/26/2012 10:44:00 AM
    a suspense at the end i like.

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    Date: 4/26/2012 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for stopping by and sharing!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:00:00 PM
    LOL...how do you keep up with the "pace" G ;) Cool write...yeah, I got to agree with the title, though...after 21x...lol clever...big hugs, hun, love deb

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    Date: 4/26/2012 2:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...too funny!!! Hugs and love...thank you for sharing with me.
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 6:39:00 PM
    very nice nonet G...thanks for sharing

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    Date: 4/26/2012 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sir..a pleasure seeing you!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 6:01:00 PM
    I admire this. I wouldn't have remembered it was the 21 time. I like" busta rhyme", gimme some mo..IT MUST B NICE LOL

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    Date: 4/25/2012 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lmao!! I can't even respond to you...lol