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If you Could Tread on my Heart

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If you Could Tread on my Heart


If you could read my mind
if you could tread on my heart,
a rose waiting to bloom you could find
a waterfall about to start.

If you could tread on my heart
in the love garden you could see,
a waterfall about to start
waiting for your nod only.

In the love garden you could see
moon beams hanging in the sky,
waiting for your nod only
to come down and kiss your eyes.

Moon beams hanging in the sky
stars waiting you could find,
to come down and kiss your eyes
it's time you read my mind.

Stars waiting you could find
a waterfall about to start,
it's time you read my mind
if you could tread on my heart.

A waterfall about to start
a rose waiting to bloom you could find,
if you could tread on my heart
if you could read my mind!



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  1. Date: 11/1/2012 2:26:00 PM

    I see you got on the winners list with a pantoum, same as I. way to go, Kash. It must be from about the time you began learning this awesome poetry form!

  1. Date: 11/1/2012 3:37:00 AM

    Brilliantly done Kash!...Love the 4th verse especially...Congratulations! - Tim

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 11:15:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Kash

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:36:00 PM

    CONGRATS KASH ON ANOTHER TOUCHING WRITE AND EXCITING WIN LUV .. G R E A TTTT

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Good Enough" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 7:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your awesome win my friend, Kash! I enjoyed reading your poem! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 7:00:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem in SandyIvy's "Good Enough" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:30:00 PM

    I remember this beauty! Congratulations on your win, Kash! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:03:00 PM

    A lovely pantoum Kash. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:23:00 PM

    Kash, .. Congratulations with your wonderful and "Good Enough" poem in Sandy's contest. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 7:21:00 PM

    :-) love your good win' thank you' Sandy

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 6:54:00 AM

    Nice structure ... nice imagery... nice... Terry

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:15:00 AM

    A very beautiful poem, Kash. I always enjoy your creativity in describing a story by poem. Just incredible :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 8:17:00 PM

    Beautiful and touching write....good luck to you in the contest : )

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 9:21:00 PM

    Hey Kash, I grew up listening to this song as my parents were crazy about it...So this means that you are listening to some of the American oldies?...I tried to get u hooked on jazz...no luck...haha. You painted the song with a dazzling poem! Good luck, friend!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 12:09:00 PM

    A rare beauty is oozing out in almost stanzas but the third one is extremely beautiful, 'In the love garden you could see, moon beams hanging in the sky, waiting for your nod only to come down and kiss your eyes'. Excellent heart touching write and thank you for your appreciating my series Poem. Love and best wishes....Ravindra ...Kash P

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 12:07:00 AM

    It's not easy to write a poem using this form, you did a great job, Kash! A winner in my book, my best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:14:00 PM

    Love this nice creation dear poet.

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 5:29:00 PM

    very beautiful poem. thank you for your kind comment

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 3:57:00 PM

    btw, that was one of the song titles I too had considered. there were about ten that I loved from the long list of his titles. Have you ever heard that song: If I could read your mind? If not, you need to listen to it at youtube.

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 3:56:00 PM

    wow, this is awesome, Kash!! King of Pantoums hits another one out of the park. If Francine doesn't place this, she is crazy!

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 3:25:00 PM

    Excellent, Kash! I'm "nodding," so bring on the waterfall, flowers and stars of passion. This is really excellent and it is one of Lightfoot's best songs. Winning wishes for you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 2:58:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your poem Kash! Keep up the good penning, great work!

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 2:40:00 PM

    I love the way you can take a form and deliver it along with great poetry, that takes special skill, thanks for the sharing this Kash, hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 2:05:00 PM

    Lovely new lyrics to a favorite song!!!!

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 12:29:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Mr. Lightfoot was a very prolific write or lyrics...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Kash great Pantoum and super entree for the contest, best of luck and nice to see you around, hope you don't mind but check 5th stanza first line typo..David

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:39:00 AM

    wow you sound so sad BIG HUGS! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:12:00 AM

    I love this poem Kash. This is winning material. Awesome job!! Love, Gail

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:04:00 AM

    I like this one.. I can't wait for the next one, good job!!.:JP}