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Is There Any Peace

Weeping willow growing outside my office door
blows in the wind like angel wings.
Each wing unfurls as though taking flight
to some haven where there is peace.
And with this peace comes perfect rest.
The kind of rest given by God
as His gentle breeze blows this tree

Kwansaba-  7 lines with 7 words per line 
and no word has more than 7 letters.

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  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:23:00 AM

    kinda of sad but very cool

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 8:00:00 PM

    Marty , i really really like this peaceful poem. I love the willow tree.

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 7:55:00 PM

    Outstanding performance. The structure is very god.

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 3:00:00 PM

    You did a great job pulling all of this together using the Kwansaba form, Marty. I dig the imagery and theme a lot.