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Not I

                                             

                                              Look at them dance,
                                              Look at them fly
                                              Look how they glisten,
                                              Under starry sky's
                                              See how they're free,
                                              All they can be
                                              Watch as their spirits run dry
                                              Should I be happy, or should I be sad?,
                                              Should I enjoy what I don't have?
                                              Yet as the night finally dies,
                                              And we say our goodbyes,
                                              I wish I was them,
                                              Not I.

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  1. Date: 4/24/2012 2:58:00 PM

    Welcome to PS. Enjoyed your writing. Keep it up

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 1:12:00 PM

    Welcome to P-Soup Devin, hope you will write, read and comments alot of poem here. Yours poem is good written. Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 1:09:00 PM

    Very catchy poem,enjoyed reading thankyou ;)