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Borne On The 4th of July

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Borne On The 4th of July

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Life, within a breath; I took this vile containing the world painting my vision askew!?

All its glitters, thoughts, wants and desires atop ashes to become; dust upon dust....

Turning it over that it may flow into the winds once again; forgotten waters now lost ~

While raising my eyes their smiling towards the sky anew; afore times rustic burdens 

These chains should they fall from the flesh aneath sight amid this cage, made night?!

Light to walk past what never was; covered by sacreds love; the children of promise....

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....“Borne, On `The 4th of July`” ~

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  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Close the 11th but love this piece all the same...luv shannon

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 2:48:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 3:14:00 PM
    Lovely poem, John. Anticipation grew as the poem progressed, and indeed, you delivered! Hugs, Catie :)