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Cry to God

Do you know how it feels, darling?
Watching your hands on her, dangling
I wipe my heart’s blood

No tear’s shed but I walk in crawls
And let a chunk of my heart falls
Pale me cries to God

(23 April 2012)

For Tail Rhyme Time Contest
Sponsored by: Black Eyed Susan

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:57:00 PM

    I often read poems when I have the time long after they was posted, really enjoyed this one!!

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Awwwwwww.....very nice poem...great write...

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 8:06:00 AM

    nice write,congrats

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 1:58:00 PM

    A belated congratulations on your win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme Time" contest Dinda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Congrats on your win in the contest, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/15/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Congrats on your win in the contest, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 8:54:00 PM

    a sad one, Dinda. Glad I am finally seeing your winning poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 6:36:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, Dinda. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 3:10:00 PM

    The heart that bleeds from love's pain....very moving. Well done on your winning placement in the contest !!

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:42:00 AM

    Congratulations Dinda!! on your win!! Well Done!! big hugs, love ya , deb

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:35:00 AM

    Hey Dinda,Congrats on your win.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 11:25:00 AM

    Dinda congrats on your win..David

  1. Date: 5/14/2012 10:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Dinda xx

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 8:49:00 AM

    Very touching Tail Rhyme by you Dinda.Enjoyed the read.Thanks for your kind comments at my pages.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 2:01:00 PM

    This draws out a deep despair from the author and I can palpate her pain...great topic for a tail rhyme...wipe my heart's blood is a super strong phrase. :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:22:00 PM

    Your poem was perfect... Thank you for helping me understand that one line.. once again.. good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 10:06:00 AM

    deeply engraved work, dinda.. superb!.. best wishes and huggs!

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 9:37:00 AM

    deeply engraved work, dinda.. superb!.. best wishes and huggs!

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 9:08:00 AM

    a lovely sensible write Dinda, enjoyed..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 11:08:00 AM

    Profound and heartfelt write,dear Dinda! Everyone who`s been on that road,(including myself) knows that life and love can be such a cruel experience.Great work here! Hugs,Arild