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Midnight Pearls

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Midnight Pearls

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                                        Shine, midnight pearls!
                                        The smoke curls up in whirls of doom

                                        On the wet sand 
                                        my own hand draws unplanned pierced hearts

                                        Deep blue-black sky
                                        I play by rules and sigh despair

                                        To lay aside 
                                        starry-eyed dreams that hide a sin

                                        Shine, distant stars!
                                        Through guitars notes, through scars of time

                                        For her first kiss
                                        an abyss drains all bliss from me

                                        And far away
                                        shadows play down their spray of doubts

                                        Opaque pearls, shine!
                                        On this fine night, define my north



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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:46:00 PM

    nice win, PD

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:02:00 PM

    CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! A LOVELY POEM .

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 2:48:00 PM

    BEAUTIFUL! GREAT WIN...AND DESERVEDLY SO! Ps...Thank You...For your always welcome SUPPORT.

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, Ruben

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:49:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Ruben !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 4:55:00 PM

    nice win Ruben.......PD

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 4:14:00 PM

    So beautiful to read this beauty again on nights like this...'For her first kiss an abyss drains all bliss from me'..That's very profound to feel the abyss just for her kiss-Congratulations on your deserved win.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 11:18:00 PM

    I'll bet she had more than pearls to show you the way! It's good to see you here with this nice piece, Ruben, RAY

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 2:25:00 AM

    A real stunning winning piece this is my dear friend Ruben. I'm so so glad & so honored to read one of your outstanding poems today with its outstanding form. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your super win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:36:00 AM

    I can see from my old comment beneath here how much I loved this from before. It's awesome seeing this one honored again. COnGRATS, Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 8:27:00 PM

    you rock................. love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:09:00 PM

    And I don't know how many poets here check the form of a poem before reading it.(I do:)).I doubt whether any poet ever has written a Gem like this in Thank-bauk form!!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:34:00 PM

    "define my north" Love it, Ruben! I am fishing today, fishing to catch some wonderful heart on my line...Ha! HA! so watch out! Love and hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 8:06:00 PM

    very nice it's a beautiful poem

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 11:10:00 AM

    A touching write, Ruben! First time I'd ever thought of the stars as midnight pearls...wonderful imagery! The moon always seems to be given center stage, oh but those stars aren't such a moody lot.:) Best wishes, congratulations on your win! Mikki

  1. Date: 7/4/2012 4:29:00 PM

    Blush some more, this is a great poem. I really love the way you have used the than bauk form to make couplets. Beautiful.

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 9:41:00 AM

    :-(,,,, hope you don't get mad... pd

  1. Date: 6/19/2012 9:39:00 AM

    I'm sorry,,,, i did a boo boo...pd

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 1:39:00 AM

    magical even... congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/2/2012 8:10:00 PM

    Ruben, a wonderful congratulations in the contest.. :-) PD

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:47:00 AM

    ahhhh once again, my senses tingling with the reading of this poem...and once again, congrats on your placement in Brian's contest this time....the winning spot of #1, yooo hooo !!!

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your over the top win in Brian's "#179 Contest" Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 5:54:00 AM

    This is amazing...and than-bauk form...wow!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 6:07:00 PM

    Awsomely gripping and well deserving of your first place win, Ruben!!! Congratulations!!! love ya, deb

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Ruben, WOW! Personification extraordinaire! Congrats to you, fine poet! :) Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 10:54:00 AM

    congratulations onyour first place.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 2:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your great win! loved the poem.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Embraces the senses...so lovely. A well deserved win !! Congratulations !!

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 6:44:00 PM

    ABSOLUTELY CAPTIVATING!!! NO WONDER YOUR ONE OF MY FAVORITE POETS!!! STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!Congrats on your win Ruben....

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 5:51:00 PM

    a stunning poem I'm sure I've seen before. One of your best and congrats on your win.

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