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About This Poem

our name still together


divorce letter---
our names still together
on the bark of a tree




;)

not my story :)

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  1. Das Avatar
    Ashesh Das
    Date: 5/1/2012 1:40:00 PM
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    Lovely juxtaposition. I am a fan of your haiku.
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    Terry L. Allen
    Date: 4/29/2012 3:25:00 AM
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    So glad you put not my story. Very poignant piece. Great write. Huggs TLee
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 4/23/2012 2:41:00 PM
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    This WAS MY STORY!!! You do engraving too?..haha You have such a knack at these modern haiku...I do hope that one day you will write a book and do an entire chapter on your wonderful haiku....I can just see it now....don't forget the footnote for this chapter..."I dedicate this chapter to my nutty American friend, Gwendolen." She harassed me until I finally wrote this book! :) " ha ha.
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 4/23/2012 1:36:00 PM
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    enjoyed reading this one again Kash ;)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/22/2012 10:35:00 PM
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    oops I spelled it wrong , it's wilberforce. Strange name to remember. How had you heard of that man? I saw the movie about him many years ago. He was an awesome man in British history.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/22/2012 10:33:00 PM
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    Wilburforce is for Brian's contest. It's hit and miss with him. I never know what of my stuff he will like. I am curious to see if he is fond of Wilburforce!!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/22/2012 10:21:00 PM
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    This is very nice, Kash. Maybe you could say names, in the plural.I am thinking when two people engrave something on a tree like Tony loves Mary. So it's two names. Sweet one!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/22/2012 3:57:00 PM
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    Not my story either.....who owns it then? It is well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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    Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 4/22/2012 3:33:00 PM
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    This is very nice!! enjoyed your Haiku.
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    ilene bauer
    Date: 4/22/2012 2:23:00 PM
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    glad it's not your story. it is a little gem, though. nice one!
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    bl devnath
    Date: 4/22/2012 1:58:00 PM
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    Exceptional style you used to pen love. Loved always, bl
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 4/22/2012 1:38:00 PM
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    Love the depth here of emotion, fact. Hugs, Gail
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 4/22/2012 1:31:00 PM
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    what a difference the start of a love makes, akshi buddy!!... awesome 'ku... come over!..:)

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 4/22/2012 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    KASHI... :)
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    Elliott Bowe THe DrUnKeN POeT
    Date: 4/22/2012 1:14:00 PM
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    Well written... Succinct but powerful.
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    Catie Lindsey
    Date: 4/22/2012 1:08:00 PM
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    good thing it is not your story, that would have been sad. it is a very good haiku, with lovely imagery. hugs, Catie :)


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