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Below is the poem entitled Rain which was written by poet Amanda Sullivan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Rain

Rain, wet, cold, tiny little molecules, almost shaped like tagpoles, clear, yet shades of blue, pelting down as if almost new, breathtaking from the grey smoking chimney view, roaring winds sweep through the rear choking smog, enchanting, yet behold misery, frustration, panic, eagerness run through, back away, back away, from your rear window in situ.

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  1. Date: 9/17/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Wonderful picutre of a rainy day - enjoyed this very much.

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 9/17/2012 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ann, thank you for your kind comment, I really am glad you enjoyed it xx <3
  1. Date: 4/23/2012 4:59:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amanda. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 10/23/2012 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty xx
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 8:18:00 PM
    I like the imagery here! Well done!

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty xx
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:33:00 PM
    nice piece

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty xx
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 12:37:00 PM
    Alot of rain.....after rain comes the sun ! Well written Amanda, thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty xx
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 12:23:00 PM
    That's really nice. Puts me in mind of the chimney sweep scene from Mary Poppins!

    Sullivan Avatar Amanda Sullivan
    Date: 10/23/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww Ty Shelley xx :)