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WET DREAMS

        WET DREAMS
I know not why your love's evading me
nor what to do, so that your heart can see,
my passion grows no matter what I do
and makes my heart to keep on loving you
though all it's brought is pure insanity;

in dreams I've wept, but kept on loving you
and tears, they flow, no matter what I do,
I tried to take my burning love in hand
but it's a thing my heart can't understand,
and sleep won't tell what love is coming to;

if I could dream the dream both night and day
I'd spend my life just sleeping where I lay
and waking from the dream in burning sweat,
I lie content, and feel my hand is wet
from love you've given me, in your own way.
© ron wilson aka vee bdosa

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  1. Date: 4/21/2012 1:30:00 PM

    This is more than just iambic pentameter, is it quatrain? I'm not sure. That's the problem with the forms list, it never captures iambic pentameter correctly. I don't see this poem as sad at all. But like others, which say, "I have loved you all along," it confuses me. A beautiful poem, Vee. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 1:14:00 PM

    so beautiful Ron! It flows so well. So sad but well written.