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LOVE at FIRST SIGHT

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LOVE at FIRST SIGHT

Love was in the air when he laid eyes on her.
Childhood; elementary and even high school with her.
Walking towards her, he greeted her.
Anxiety spiraled as he hugged her.
Conversation grew deeper as he sat with her.
Wanting to get closer because he was falling for her.

Another woman called pausing the time he was having with her.
Knowing he had to answer; he stepped away and spoke to her.
She stated that something wasn't quite right with her.
She said that her stomach had been bothering her.
Now he's thinking back if he came inside her.
Thinking if she lied to him about her tubes being tied inside her.

Does he blame himself for listening to her?
Knowing right from wrong and yet he can't blame her.
Does he blame the devil for allowing him to be intimate with her?
Is he not a human that makes mistakes just like her?
Begging God to make a way for him and her.
Asking God to forgive him for committing the sin with her.

God said, "relax my son, you were only dreaming of her."







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  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:00:00 PM

    i love that poem

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Post Script: I just got the "her" at the verses ends. That rocks! I gotta try that. Whadda ya call that, I'm just pencil, but your definitely a pen! re: "Love at first sight" andreatravis

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:41:00 PM

    WOW! "Love at first sight". That blew me away. I feel like I got to peek inside your soul, just a small view of the beautiful and unexpected, YOU. Anticipating more! andreatravis

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 9:57:00 PM

    "Conversation grew deeper as he sat with her...." I absolutely love it!! This flowed well. Great poem INK!!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/19/2012 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dearly Doreen...hugs!!!
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 4:27:00 AM

    One word for this,Pace~~ REFRESHING!! I'm loving it!xoxo-Melly

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/19/2012 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..Thank you for sharing with me!!
  1. Date: 6/4/2012 7:09:00 PM

    I REALLY like this! I REALLY like your poetry Pace <3

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/4/2012 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you beautiful!!! Hugs
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 8:46:00 AM

    This to me is heart written than hand written Pace G, i appreciate every of your kind comments on my page. Luv you.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All smiles!!! Thank you dearly!!
  1. Date: 6/2/2012 12:07:00 AM

    "Wow... OMG!!!! wOW.... that was intence babe... thats all that i can say. Carma"

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 6/2/2012 12:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you madam Carma!!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Very nice...lol...msde me blush a lil

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/18/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..is that right?!..hmm!!!
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 12:18:00 AM

    Glad you enjoyed my Time And Chance poem, Pace. Interesting poem - quite a surprise at the end. Well written. God bless, Maureen

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/18/2012 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol..well thank you!!
  1. Date: 5/7/2012 7:37:00 PM

    such trickery slick one.... I love this one. Your a bad man!!!! (smile).

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 5/7/2012 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lmao!! Glad you enjoyed it
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 8:48:00 PM

    I much enjoyed the originality and honesty of this poem. Well thought out and well written. I must say though often in dreams we come out luckier than in reality. Have a blessed life Huggs TLee

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/26/2012 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts..you are so true..luv and hugs!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 6:54:00 PM

    I enjoyed your poem. I think it is perhaps an evolved monorhyme. I really liked the way you ended every line with 'her.' I wonder if that is revealing something deeper? Hugs, Catie :)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/25/2012 7:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for stopping by..I checked out the monorhyme but I'm not sure if it fits.
  1. Date: 4/24/2012 6:37:00 PM

    WEll, that was great making it a dream, G. I imagine a guy feels very stressed hearing a woman say something is "not quite right" with her! I like how you made it into something ethical, discussing feelings of guilt and how it was a sin. That is refreshing to see!

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/24/2012 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol..Thank you..yes your are correct all the way!!
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 3:29:00 PM

    Excellent piece,as always G.Pace:)

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/24/2012 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm late in responding Arild...but thank you!!
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Sweet dreaming G. - well written poem. -oxox Anne-Lise

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/22/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you beautiful for stopping by!! hugs
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 9:41:00 AM

    splendid write G....regards...Joseph

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/22/2012 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a million!!! Always enjoy your presence.
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 4:35:00 PM

    A very nice poem here G. Keep writing. Hugs, Gail

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/21/2012 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your kind words!! hugs
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 3:57:00 PM

    Nice one G Pace...as usual... smiles.... chiquita

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/21/2012 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sweetheart!!
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 2:49:00 PM

    Nice job G!! really good rythm...it raps good too ;)...just sayin... keep that pen movin' my friend--big hugs love deb

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/21/2012 3:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well thank you! If only I knew how to rap...lol
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 12:31:00 PM

    This is good all the way through! Change the sheets main!lmao

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 4/21/2012 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Life and it's hurdles!
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 12:08:00 PM

    a wet dream? now i've read everything.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/21/2012 12:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes sir..thank you for stopping by.