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Break

You said you're miserable,
I said I am too,
Breaking down on the last syllable.
Tears broke out later
When I realised
I will always love you,

No matter what I lose.

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  1. Date: 9/27/2012 4:05:00 PM

    beautifully written, each sentence very nicely put in order:

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:21:00 PM

    '...no matter what I lose.' There is sadness, yet a glimmer of redeeming faith and hope. So few lines, so much deep emotion... bittersweet. Thank you for this... it will resonate with many, the aim of enduring poetry.

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 9:44:00 AM

    The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Annie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 7:23:00 AM

    Sincerity at it's best.