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About This Poem

Twilight

moonlit dew cast

stars gaze past eve

hearts masts move free


emotions drown

hot flesh crowns him
               
souls wound tautly


temples lust weave

eve conceives dawn

relieved spirits


Written by Gwendolen Rix 
4-16-12
For Nette Onclaud’s Contest~Twilight Than Bauk~

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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 7/9/2012 12:04:00 AM
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    Now, What is that sacred tablets poem about? Another one that is totally beyond me.! Jaggy
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    Wolf Lief
    Date: 5/4/2012 11:49:00 AM
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    amazing keep it up light is something i cant write but please read my work pleaaasssseeee!!!!! with cherrys i would love your opion
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 4/26/2012 3:33:00 PM
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    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    bl devnath
    Date: 4/25/2012 8:02:00 AM
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    Wonderful poem, read it lately. Though I offer my heartiest congratulation on your win in the contest. Loved always, bl
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/22/2012 10:54:00 PM
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    Hey, CONGRATS to you, Gwen. Put up some new poems!!!
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    Katie Telling
    Date: 4/22/2012 7:58:00 PM
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    this is awesome... congrats on your win!! i look forward to reading more!
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    Prince Ekpemandu
    Date: 4/21/2012 3:04:00 PM
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    nice one dear
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/19/2012 6:22:00 PM
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    Rix, I love this poem, one can only give in to all emotions... very deep, and vast... good luck...always..pd
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 4/19/2012 4:46:00 PM
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    Congrats on your winning entry..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 4/19/2012 4:02:00 PM
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    I really like that the rhyme is not sing songy or obvious! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 4/19/2012 5:36:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Gwen. Love, Carol
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 4/18/2012 11:44:00 AM
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    nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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    Joseph May
    Date: 4/18/2012 9:43:00 AM
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    congrats on your win Gwendolen
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 4/18/2012 8:30:00 AM
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    Congrats , Gwen, Looks like I am dragging you down, jag
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 4/18/2012 7:32:00 AM
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    Congrats Gwen... Beautiful words. BG
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/18/2012 5:56:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win Gwen xx
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 4/18/2012 5:35:00 AM
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    we both need to celebrate our win,what say you my Gwen!why don't you over over to ma place for a chocolate binge and then ....lets paint the soup red,yellow blue....yellow all rainbow !waiting for confirmation of our party from you!!!!!!!!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 4/17/2012 9:22:00 PM
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    enjoyed..pd
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 4/17/2012 7:03:00 PM
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    Well done, jag
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/17/2012 6:33:00 PM
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    Good one, Gwen. Thanks so much too for just being YOU.
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    David Williams
    Date: 4/17/2012 2:43:00 PM
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    Gwen I tried this and failed badly, yours is great,good luck..David
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    kash poet
    Date: 4/17/2012 12:34:00 PM
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    A chart topper here Gwen!!
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 4/17/2012 11:03:00 AM
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    soup mail.
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 4/17/2012 10:54:00 AM
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    Wonderful images portrayed Gwen winning wishes coming your way hugs vie
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 4/17/2012 10:52:00 AM
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    you didn't mess anything up ,its perfect!what is that mouthful of a word you wrote began ith s and ended with s!
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 4/17/2012 10:51:00 AM
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    I don`t know much about this form,Gwendolen.But these lines are truly gems! Beautiful use of words my dear friend:) Hugs,Arild
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 4/17/2012 10:50:00 AM
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    This was my first OR second...I was nervous that I'd mess it up...Where is Kash when I need him?...hahah. :)
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 4/17/2012 10:44:00 AM
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    awesome TB!you did it very skillfully!


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