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whats wrong with us

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whats wrong with us

whats wrong with us? 
i thought you said that we 
would be together forever
but you never talk to me unless
i start a conversation and then 
you act like your to busy to talk
whats wrong with us? 
do you still love me
have i lost your love
whats wrong with us?

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  1. Date: 4/17/2012 6:26:00 AM
    Nice poem.....