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  1. Date: 1/16/2013 10:31:00 AM
    this is really clever poetry,, love this Marlon...glad i found this...

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:25:00 PM
    Wow... Makes a person wish they could fly so they didn't have to confront that floor! I never thought that a floor could be intimidating. Good job.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:58:00 AM
    Nice, really nice poem of faith. Thanks for reading and for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:47:00 AM
    nicely done - enjoyed this write

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 9:20:00 AM
    A poem with several layers. I wonder if He wroks us like that, with the joys and sorrows we have to be cleansing.

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Awesome poem!!!!

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:53:00 AM
    hi Marlon great nonet reminds me i must finish the bathroom soon lol, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 9:47:00 AM
    One day soon I will have to try and enlarge my writing styles to include styles like this. Well done here. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:39:00 AM
    I love it! You made me think about God and Jesus, his son, how he has clean us from sin.

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 6:39:00 PM
    This appeals to me because I used to be a ceramic tile salesman! An excellent NONET, my friend... it all made perfect sense!

  1. Date: 5/17/2012 4:35:00 PM
    Appreciate this awesome poem! O:----- DWB ----- :D

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 6:43:00 AM
    I tho't I'd reread this spiritual piece b4 starting my Saturday morning chores! (My maid is late AGAIN!) Take Andrea's advice below and give the etheree a spin...On the PS's website there are articles written by poets...Andrea has showcased the etheree very nicely...Have a great weekend, Marlon! Shout out at me when you get one of these done...I wanna be one of the first to read it! Blessings! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 6:20:00 PM
    Cleansed of S I N - the floor is now ready to walk on - intresitng. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 9:43:00 PM
    Beautiful analogy my friend with a very striking ending, which shows the depth of this beautiful Poem. Thank you for your kind and precious comments on my new series Poem. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra... Marlon Linton.

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 8:23:00 PM
    cool analogy, Marlon! I love this kind of poem. Nonet is very similar to the etheree I am fond of writing. Have you done etheree? Just one extra line.

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 11:47:00 AM
    A stunning Analogy Marlon, thanks for your comment on mine ;-) enjoy your weekend

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 4:35:00 PM
    that must be a beautiful polished floor., very nice expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it.God blessed you.Erich

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Love the analogy you have penned. Wonderful. God Bless phyl

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 10:53:00 AM
    wonderful piece... concise and reflective!

  1. Date: 4/20/2012 8:06:00 AM
    You do a great job of telling a story that gives more than one application Marlon. This one is just great and a fave! :)