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Bubble,Bubble

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Bubble,Bubble

"Bubble, Bubble..."

Long ago and far away
A naieve mermaid born
In a bubble--purest blue--
Was hailed by harp and horn...

"Look! It's so!" They all did say,
"So beautiful! So sweet!
Soft golden hair to cuddle
And green eyes--obsolete!"

To and 'fro the tides did sway
The mermaid as she grew
Aloft within her bubble
Until each storm was through...

So it goes unto this day
The mermaid tightly holds
Her bubble--and without view--
For keeping in untolds...

deborah burch©
4/15/2012

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 8:56:00 PM
    Hey Debs Congrats on your featured poem xxxx Hugs Trace

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:52:00 PM
    Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 3:32:00 PM
    Sweet and cute bubble, bubble story....well done Deborah!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 10:19:00 AM
    I love this sweet story.. I love mermaids...yay :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 10:44:00 PM
    Well done. A Pleasant image from below the sea. Good write. Rockman :-)

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/17/2012 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Randy... :) this too, is an allagory...a great deal of my pieces are...lol thank you so much for reading my work...big hugs, love deb and thanks for the input and honesty! :)
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:41:00 PM
    hey, you made your own mermaid legend. Unique and fun to read!!!

    Pritts Avatar Rockman Pritts
    Date: 4/17/2012 10:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I see by your replies to Andrea that you're a sculptor and an artist as well. You're hands are filled with many talents. May they never end. Rockman :-)
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh, I've sculpted a clay mermaid with her 'bubble' and will be working on sketching/painting pics!! :)
    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andy...I hadn't thought of that...may I use that idea? I already have one other 'mermaid' that follows suit...THANK YOU... what a blessing...big hugs--thinking of you,love deb
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 4:20:00 PM
    A creative undersea tale, Deb! A great write. Blessings, Rhonda :))

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol, thank you Rhonda...big hugs,much love, deb
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:12:00 PM
    very nice write ,I love it.

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you elliot :)
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:19:00 AM
    I did get your SoupMail hun. Thanks for the birthday wishes and your comments about my blog. Tracie knows I love her and this is just my view of the whole picture in poem thing. Luv to you always Michael

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 4/16/2012 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Michael dear...and I know you love everybody ;) me too....big huggss,love deb
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:04:00 AM
    nice story - leaves me wondering :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:09:00 AM
    cute poem

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:30:00 AM
    A lovely tale of life under the sea. Can only imagine the 'untolds'.