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Her distended gifts

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Her distended gifts

Then she bragged
front mine self;
 
her lips have yet
been kissed

So forth came I,
past those lips
melting way
her fears





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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:08:00 AM

    How nice of you to step forward. :) Enjoyed this cute poem, James. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 2:26:00 AM

    Who would not feel save when fears melt away.. Enjoyed your gem James, have not read you in a while.. Hope yourself and Noah are doing okay :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Hi James - Very nicely written. Like the style of the poem. Thank you for your kind comments about my poem. - Gail

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 3:40:00 PM

    Lovely written James! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Thanks for reading my stuff, Sir James. Each posting of your own work is a treat. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:12:00 AM

    A masterpiece of speculation. Methinks thee art up to no good. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 8:16:00 AM

    JP....I like the "Victorian" imagery here! cool touch! jimbo

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:09:00 PM

    I really like the last part of this, melting away her fears. Very nice!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 12:21:00 PM

    you pulled me in with this wondrous piece, james... love how you phrased your thoughts!... romance abounds!..:) huggs!