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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Stranded/Ghosts" contest ~^~Broken Butterfly. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 10:19:00 PM

    I was hanging on each and every word, Beautiful Butterfly! Loved the description of your clothing and how you could have had a happy ending either way...so, basically, you went straight to the cabin and cuddled up near a cracklin' fire. Nice!....Intense too! Congrats on a wonderful win...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:51:00 PM

    Congrats on your 1st place win BB it's a great story and I love happy endings, hugs vie

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:22:00 PM

    Beautifully written story and well executed. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 3:45:00 PM

    wonderful winner, congrats to you, enjoyed this. harry

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 3:22:00 PM

    This was very beautiful! A big congratulations on your win ...Samia

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 2:34:00 PM

    Sounds very real and petrifying! Congrad's on your win. Light & love

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:21:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me.Great write.

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/16/2012 2:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Elliot
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 12:28:00 PM

    This was a good write. It gives the possibilities of two endings. Both of which have hope for life. Well done. Rockman :-)

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/16/2012 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Rockman
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 11:07:00 AM

    A beautiful story bb. - Have a lovely weekend! - Luck to you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/16/2012 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne Lise
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 11:06:00 AM

    Not your time..... They sent you back.....wow

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/16/2012 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Marlon
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM

    Terrific ending to a good story. Best of luck in the contest.

    Butterfly Avatar Broken Butterfly Date: 4/16/2012 2:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joann