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Across the Sky

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Across the Sky

The rain keeps falling on my hair as i walk down the valley The wind breeze softly on my neck as i keep hummin merrily Red wild poppies I pick whilst going down the lane I cross over the bridge to cross over again I walk to the full sun going down beyond the prarie I run in lushed green fields where once met a pink fairy With eyes full of love and golden butterflies I follow around flutterin fire-flies with tiny lantern lights I pass through each vineyard scenting the fragrance of wine I walk distance and moments in memory of time I hold on to a star which leads me somewhere far to cobbled winding streets to wherever you are to the end of the sky to the well of your cry to a coloured kite which keep soaring high to the depth of your thoughts to that soft tender part to the passion which burns in the alley of your heart. Charma Inspired by the song 'Meet me half Way'(Oldies song by kenny loggings) www.youtube.com/watch?v=apJ6JDURV68

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  1. Date: 6/25/2014 9:21:00 AM
    ....The bridge you crossed sounds like the Great Bridge we cross into heaven that people have mentioned in near death experiences. Wonderful imagery, impression and mood Charmaine! Always~~Keith~~

  1. Date: 12/28/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Hi Charmaine, another beautiful write. May the magic forever flow from your pen. You always have such a gentle way with your words. They merge together into there own beauty which you paint upon your canvas and show before us and we bow before the beauty of your words. Every image is easy to see and the piece flows from start to finish with your own special light. Keep your pen filled with this light and the rose within your heart. Fly high. Have a good Sunday. Later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:00:00 AM
    Wow, this one is fantastic! It seems somewhat happier than some of your other poems, which really seals the deal because I happen to like happy poems. If you ever do catch a case of heartache, I have heard that the doctors have come out with a new pill for it. ",)

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 6:38:00 AM
    When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Charmaine. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 12:55:00 PM
    That's a star we'd all like to grasp... Great...Terry

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:03:00 AM
    an impressive and imagery laden write Charma my dear friend.. the flow is as cascading waters so refreshing .. a very old song indeed but a lovely choice to be so inspired my friend.. happy Sunday..luv..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 11:41:00 PM
    A beautiful poem full of wonderful imagery and romance! Isn't that song from Top Gun? You are making me feel old with that "oldies song" statement! LOL...oh well, I guess I'm getting there. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:36:00 PM
    So nice. Great work.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:34:00 AM
    What a journey! Very well done, Charmaine! "I hold on to a star which leads me somewhere far/to cobbled winding streets to wherever you are"! Beautiful! Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I hold on to a star.. cos stars hold wishes.. Even when i was young i used to hold on to a star.. and somehow dream beautifully at night..
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:08:00 AM
    what a way to be inspired by a song, Charma. Lovely!! Love your avatar you are using too. HOw are you doing these days?

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 7:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yEAH I love the oldie group air supply and kenny loggings even though it isn't of my era..I do enjoy those very meaningful songs.Re how am i doing?I'm feeling great these two days dear.I'm sure you're enjoying being the pampering grandma :)
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:49:00 AM
    Another morning start for me!!! Beautiful!!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks so much g PACE
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 1:50:00 AM
    superb write.your growing on me these with pulchritudinous fresh lush green poems.your style is so gentle.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for saying so elliott
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 1:02:00 AM
    Hi... Charma,,, a very nice and lovely poem... lol.. i know the song... and I like Kenny... or is it kennie... you are such a poet... your words come to life while readin... i like the following fire-fliesl... i get so amazed by them... i also like your fragrance walk... gosh your awesome... he he he... green fields...pink fairy... always..pd

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 4/13/2012 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    There always have to be some fantasy in my posts p.d.. I think that's the part of me which never grows.. I still love the life a child leads .. :)got me smiling.. Thanks for stoppin g by dear :)Hugs Charma