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Broken-Petals

A cold mist surrounds me,
I can't help but watch as my petals die.
I look for my friends who used to stand tall beside me, 
But, they are curled in pain,
I cry to them in vain.
Slowly, I'm joining the fallen ones beside me.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 9:55:00 PM

    Congrats on your win.Very nice personification here .Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Heaven. Love, Carol