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A Gnat who met a Cat

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A gnat's now found nikko's cat  > 0.0 <
who smugly stood face beaming...
"My wrath on you, come bite me!!!"
"Eyes on focus... charge!!!"

Its daring sting pointing straight.
Was it his squeal, gave a scare?
...veered off looking for new prey,
Oh, no... James, watch out!!!



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For Linda Marie's contest " BITE ME!!!"
by gautami phookan



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  1. Date: 4/16/2012 10:30:00 PM

    Congrats on your adorable winning cat! A great response to Nikko's bite. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:06:00 AM

    ....You added Nikko's cat! : ) Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's Contest, Gautami! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:15:00 PM

    Wasn't this a fun lil contest? Excellent entry and energy portrayed by your powerful gnat. Congrats, Guati. Love, GWendolen

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:00:00 PM

    Can't trust these gnats. Congratulations Gautami. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Again, I found it very cute.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:26:00 PM

    Congrats Gautami on your win!! well done...big hugs,love deb

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:36:00 PM

    congrats Gautami on sweet success for this super duper entry luv.. cool one..

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:51:00 AM

    Very cute entry, Gautami. Love your little cat picture.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:17:00 PM

    lol...good one Gautami...good luck in the contest!!! lol...cats!! big huggsss,love deb :)

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 4:39:00 PM

    Hi Gauti,thanks for your sweet words,good luck with this entry,love it!you are a good human being.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 12:02:00 PM

    You got me all smiley here, gautami-- heehee that cat is proving to be a scary cat to those bugs :D-- James better watch out for that gnat :D! Very cute write, gautami :D and thanks, I think you've appeased that cat, making him have an appearance in your dodoitsu :) hugs to you (& you are not being pesky at all!) and I'll see you around, oki? I'm swamped by fleas or would that be gnats? :D

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 8:53:00 AM

    Enjoyed this funny write very much Gautami.Best wishes to you.