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Haiku 11 Winter solitude

Winter solitude

my breath mingles

between us

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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 12:12:00 AM

    Wonderful haiku here, Charmaine. It truly invokes a scene of winter solitude with breath in crisp air....and objectively neutral too. Btw, I was being over-dramatic in Ruben's blog, just trying to get responses from people in a way that I probably shouldn't as much. I don't even want a worst enemy to burn, because an enemy can become a best friend too....and all the other silent jazz playing on invisible breezes.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 4:12:00 PM

    This is my second favourite.. my less favourite is 'our lips' the one of silent joy cos i've been in doubt and still am if it falls under senryu or haiku since its still human nature? Confuusus ............bzzzz

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 9:52:00 AM

    : ) Majestic! Outstanding! How did you do it? To my FAVs! WOW! So beautiful, Charmaine! Ruben.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i replied above by mistake.. Rub
  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:11:00 AM

    LOVE THIS

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks andrea sweet lady
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 9:29:00 AM

    Awesome!! This makes me all warm inside regardless of the cold air.. Great series of haiku's you have strung along!!

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much for reading so much :)
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 7:04:00 AM

    Nice feeling.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 7:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You should try haiku.. its short and fun..Not easy as it seems but its fun..