Haiku 007 First day of lent by Charmaine Chircop

Ruben O.

Date: 4/13/2012 10:16:00 AM

To my FAVs! : ) Excellent!

Ruben O.

Date: 4/13/2012 10:15:00 AM

To my FAVs! : ) Excellent!

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 4:05:00 PM

Favourite?tnks... My tummy didn't say that that day :)..It wanted to kill the bzzzzzzzzz fly

Date: 4/13/2012 6:18:00 AM

This is so darling. You really should be putting all these into one big post for that one ku ku contest!! (come on, just DO IT)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 7:15:00 AM

Nooooo Kuku I'm afraid not :).. I just entered my second contest in a life-time for Linda's buzzing bee bite..but cos i know its for fun.. I can't find a way to explain it darn.. I wish but somehow I cannot..But i will support all the writers in kuku crazy anyway :)

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/12/2012 9:41:00 AM

Flies love our food don't they.. Sometimes they can be a bit annoying... Good write my friend...:JP]

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/13/2012 7:15:00 AM

They love our food ..i just don't love them..geee..dirty flies :)

Chris D. Aechtner

Date: 4/12/2012 8:55:00 AM

Ja-ja, I got it. Ooch! A fly can make you very sick, but sometimes it is far less toxic than other items that make it into our food....especially when eating out at a resty. Uggh! Charma, this is still one of my favourite haiku that I have read in awhile.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 9:10:00 AM

Thanks decent disciple for stating so :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/12/2012 7:02:00 AM

Oki when this happened i was taking soup at marks and spencer restaurant.A fly fell in my soup,i didn't eat it afterwards ofcourse i get food poison.. :) and i tried to transmit the feeling here.In a haiku one have to associate what's happening with a season or event.. that's why i used first day of lent :).. I was hungry and remained hungry that day..My break was over..it was like a day of lent :)Got it?

Raj Dey Ranjan

Date: 4/12/2012 6:57:00 AM

How ? nice work.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/12/2012 7:03:00 AM

I replied above.. by mistake.. Can you read it? tnks for reading my haiku too

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Haiku 007 First day of lent

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