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I'm Coming, Father

Father had always spoken of ships
Their swiftness, capacity and might
I too- am amazed by this one
I stare out and into the night

It's cold up here, and I wonder
Where we are, relative to the globe
Small snowflakes tickle my rosy cheeks
As I cuddle in my mother's old robe

I walk down to my bunk with the others
Close my eyes and dream of home
All the chatter and children's breathing
Just make me feel so lost and alone

I don't know how long I've been sleeping
But there's a red light above my head
Screaming people are running all around
Filling my little soul with utter dread

The boat- this ship is shaking
So violently, i can hardly stand
I jump up, and attempt to run up the stairs
And I search in vain for any land

Instead, I see a dreadful sight
And my nightmares are all too real
Tilting and sinking- oh! We're sinking!
Some stop and they try to kneel

Panic has stricken the remainder
that have not fallen overboard
My hands are gripping the railing
The only life support I can afford

To die- will it be so painful?
tears are flowing as I embrace my slaughter
Alone in the night full of suffering
I let go- and I greet the water

Ice- I am blue, I am burning
Father, can you help me be free?
It's cold, so cold- I need to breathe in...
I'm coming home to thee

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  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:48:00 PM

    congrats J. on a brilliant write and win for the Titanic theme ..luv..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 9:42:00 AM

    J, congrats on your win.. David

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest J. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:47:00 AM

    congrats on a awsome write!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 1:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win J xx