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Everlasting Love

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Everlasting Love

Devotion of a rare hue
Canopies dusk; fashions dawn
Ceaseless esteem journeys far
Triumphs without doubt

04/09/2012
Diana-Marie Bombardieri
For CONTEST - 1-6 lines of romance and love (Russell Sivey)

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  1. Date: 4/28/2012 7:27:00 AM
    Very lovely dear Diana. I enjoyed this much.Supper belated congratulations xoxox

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:51:00 PM
    I enjoyed this. The first line engages wonder immediately; good. I also find "canopies" as a verb to be in a similar vein, but I was momentarily confused, thinking "fashions" was a noun (but it is still effective; keep it). Aside from that, the expansive end rings of perfect truth without being maudlin. I want it to be longer but it should not be. Very very good!

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Very nicely written..........George

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 7:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in the contest, Diana.

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Many congrats on your feature this week - rgds Janette

  1. Date: 4/17/2012 5:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Congrats Hun on this well deserved win. Love the words. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 5:19:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Diana. Excellent. Nice going. Thanks for your kind words. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 1:35:00 PM
    Diana-Marie, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Prettily said. Congratulations Diana. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 8:30:00 AM
    Great work Diana congrats all my love to you, can't wait till Thurs hugs galore mom,

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 8:04:00 AM
    congrats Diana on a lovely win for this brilliant beauty write luv..

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:43:00 AM
    Very nice romantic piece.Congratulations on your superb win..love O.A

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 2:01:00 PM
    ..you romantic you..;-) Everlasting love it is! Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 11:14:00 PM
    A sweet romantic write, Diana. Good luck in the contest.