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The perils of camping

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The perils of camping


Sleeping in a tent at night
Zippered in cosy and warm
You and me then bugs take flight
In a cloud they swarm

They hover round choose their prey 
Your perfume means they bite me
In my sleeping bag I lay
then off to Dawn (P)

Allan Williams for Bite Me contest (as I am new I went for some else new Dawn Pulido)
9~4~2012

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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 5:11:00 AM

    Congratulations!! Off to a great start...thanks for your comment on my "A Longing" poem...Have a great day!...xx Holly Moore

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 6:27:00 AM

    Thanks for sharing! Hope all is going well for you! Have a great day!!! JP

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:15:00 PM

    Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Allan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:23:00 AM

    ...Nice to "meet" you and welcome to PS!

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 7:21:00 AM

    Nice, very nice, Allan! Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:33:00 PM

    Well done. Welcome to our fun center. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 9:05:00 PM

    Gosh, I hope Dawn did this too? That was sweet of you to include her. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM

    Allan!! Congrats on your win! well done! big hugs, love debs

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 7:52:00 PM

    congrats Allan on your success in my contest with this super entry luv.. reminded me of my teenage days ..

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 12:04:00 PM

    you just made me wounder if I am ever do camping 'cause I don't like bugs, thank you though ,like your poem,Ivy