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And with a sip

The hurt, the pain were now combined.
Oh love, so lost, for which she pined.
A memory of sweet embrace.
Forever gone, without a trace.

This longing, now to be dissolved.
With just a sip quickly resolved.
And so the liquid death she drank.
Into the deadly sleep she sank.


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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 6:37:00 AM

    good one and the unwalked path ..suicide! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 5/4/2012 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your comment Debbie! :)
  1. Date: 5/4/2012 5:47:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Samia. Love, Carol

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 5/4/2012 6:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again dear Carol! :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 12:10:00 PM

    What a treat to read a poem which rhymes and scans. Congratulations. Charles.

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 4/30/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so very much Clive! :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 11:24:00 AM

    The ultimate answer. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 4/30/2012 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Joyce, Thank you very much. I really appreciate it! :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:16:00 AM

    love your poem Samia...congrats on your win

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 4/30/2012 12:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Joseph!
  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Great lines Samia. Congratulations

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 4/30/2012 9:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Bob, Thank you very much!
  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:11:00 AM

    Samia and Rockman - great collaboration. You should post both parts somewhere together.

    Arroyo Avatar Samia Ali Arroyo Date: 4/27/2012 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Joann, I agree! They sound good together, don't they! Thank you Joann. :)
  1. Date: 4/10/2012 4:43:00 AM

    Oh my goodness Rockman, That was so beautiful. It truly was. Now I am overwhelmed. It's like we wrote it together ...Samia

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:18:00 AM

    I was overwhelmed by the pom to the point that I saw more potential and had to write more. I could have gone on but I ran out of characters. Great job. P.S. It needs one more line to be complete.

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 12:14:00 AM

    A light appeared before her eyes And came to her as much surprise. A glow of warmth from her release Brought to her a sense of peace. Floating like a cloud aloft. She felt so good. She felt so soft. But was it really worth the trip, By ending it with just one sip? She thinks about those left behind. They're ever present on her mind. She feels their tears, she hears their cries. But now she's locked within the skies. Left to morn the ones that live She has no comfort she can give.

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 5:30:00 PM

    Hi Anne Lise, Thank you very much. I hope you had a good Easter too! Thank you. :)

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 4:42:00 PM

    Touching but well done poem Samia. - Hope you had a nice Easter. - Have a lovely week. - oxox Anne-Lise