Show Me Everything by Arild Andresen Ertsland


michelle prital Date: 6/18/2012 10:30:00 PM Really really nice and gentle....I loved it!
Owen Yeates Date: 5/23/2012 2:44:00 PM Hi Arild another very good write about love, ireally enjoyed this thanks so much, all the best Owen
Brenda Victoria Northeast Date: 4/26/2012 9:30:00 PM An ahh moment Arild so lovely- thank you for sharing. And re your question on where i have been- I have a large family and so much happens that take me away from what I would like to do- I am ever grateful though to be apart of the solutions to helping them, but it does mean I and my passion to write and read must take second place. Love and blessings, bren : )
Gwendolen R. Date: 4/17/2012 10:55:00 AM I know who your real dance partner is so....I blush for her right now..You wrote one of the most amazing Fred Estaire like dances...that's why every gal wants one spin on the dance floor with him...ha ha So smooth your tempo and graceful your words...Amazing!....Gwendolen
The Situation Date: 4/13/2012 11:19:00 AM no fake smiles please!
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 4/10/2012 9:34:00 AM mesmerizing lines that capture then captivate a heart with this romantic dance of luv Arild.. sooo lovely luv..
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/9/2012 1:06:00 PM Lovely verse Arild love the first tow lins in last stanza very romantic xx
binibining P.iNk Date: 4/9/2012 9:36:00 AM me again :) I saw your comments in your blog :D and I totally agree with you-- we sure are connected in some way or another, isn't that just so cool and so amazing when you actually get to pinpoint how you are connected to somebody :D and yes, isn't people (& surrounding) watching just fascinating? You are so right, makes waiting (especially) less boring ;).
binibining P.iNk Date: 4/9/2012 9:20:00 AM This is another write today had a romantic slant to the word "everything"--- very beautiful thoughts you have here Arild and I think it's amazing when you find that someone to take part in that everything :D --happy to see you back here :) btw that is an awesome image of the sunset in your blog pic :D hugs :D
Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 4/8/2012 9:24:00 PM Enjoyed reading your poem tonight!!
Wilma Neels Date: 4/8/2012 1:13:00 PM Love the romantic feel and the need to experience everything that comes with it.. Enjoyed this Arild, glad to see you back :), love & hugs Wilma
nette onclaud Date: 4/8/2012 12:21:00 PM i sway with you, arild... sweetly done with natural flow of words and thoughts.. shall we all dance??:) huggs!
Tracie- Indigo Dreamweaver Date: 4/8/2012 3:47:00 AM Lovely Arild..so romantic xxx Hugs xxx
Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/7/2012 11:24:00 PM Arlid, this is a very lovely poem... I'm glad you found the one person who makes you feel like this..... have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD
Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/7/2012 10:31:00 PM Such sweet, romantic lines you have shared tonight, Arild. Lovely! I'm happy to read your poem tonight. I hope you had a wonderful and very relaxing vacation. Happy Easter, Rhonda :))
Laura Breidenthal Date: 4/7/2012 8:47:00 PM Very awesome poem! Love the hummingbird bit! So cute. Always, Laura
Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/7/2012 8:40:00 PM wow, this is so sweet and loving, ARild. I really enjoyed seeing this tonight. And yes you have been bitten by the poetrySOUP bug as well as by the poetry bug. Together they are LETHAL combination.
Dan Kearley Date: 4/7/2012 8:35:00 PM That is beautiful Arlid! Love flowing from the heart...
SCRIBE ML Date: 4/7/2012 6:06:00 PM This is the beginning of true LOVE....nice write!
Mystic Rose Date: 4/7/2012 5:15:00 PM A lovely romantic interlude Arild I enjoyed the verse hope your doing well and enjoying a great weekend hugs vie

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