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Deathland

		Rising steam from the ashen face,
		cast a shadow on the human race,
	In deadly darkness the night did soak,
	with the horrid stench of the devils cloak,
		head of evil, skull is the wreath,
		the air is full of fear, the fear of death,
	The world is ruled with a staff in the hand,
	the sea is dry 'n' theres blood in the sand,
		there is no way to leave this dreary landscape,
		from the deathland theres no escape............


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  1. Date: 5/3/2012 6:55:00 PM
    I Love thissss

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 10:39:00 PM
    STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/2/2012 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks very much, i like your work too, i am looking for something of more volume from you, i mean really looking forward to it
  1. Date: 5/1/2012 2:38:00 PM
    You said it! There is lots of fear in the world these days, even to a fear of the world ending, determined by some Mayan examining chicken bones many hundreds of years ago. Congrats on the selection. daver

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/2/2012 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for your comment, there is indeed a lot of fear, real and perceived, and that is the root cause of all violence that we see around us..its sad
  1. Date: 4/12/2012 11:11:00 AM
    dark thoughts explicitly expressed........keep the ink flowing.....~sashi

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/2/2012 11:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you sir
  1. Date: 4/8/2012 5:49:00 PM
    wow I like it ,very deep dark feeling of death and yet so romantic,I really like your style ,keep writing ,like to read more from you,Ivy

    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/21/2012 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    as i promised deathland two has been born
    Desai Avatar Aseem Desai
    Date: 5/3/2012 3:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    and read you shall :-) thanks for the comment