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Goodbye Old Friends

Friends come and go, but some have passed me by
as swiftly as the sun that lights my days.
They wave goodbye; I give a little sigh.
It seems I barely had them in my gaze.

Sweet friends I knew from youth. Where have you gone?
My bonds with some of you I felt were strong.
But journeys that we each embarked upon
divided us, and now I write this song.

Its lyrics tell the longings of my heart -
to see and be again with each dear friend
who knew me when and shared a special part
which cannot be retrieved nor has an end,
for memories are shadows cast by sun
which haunt me even when my days are done.


For Harry Horsman's Goodbye Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:19:00 AM

    You're brilliant with these. I love it.-Red

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Harry's "Goodbye" contest Andrea. I am sorry it is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Congrats on your win with this lovely poem!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:51:00 AM

    This one so deserves another win--Congrats AD!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:51:00 AM

    fav lines [ for memories are shadows cast by sun/which haunt me even when my days are done.]Crongrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on a wonderful sonnet Andy i like this one xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:25:00 PM

    Andrea this poem really melts my heart, I found the piece of me kept by the beauty of your verses, somehow I felt that way too :), congrats for your winning dear Andrea, they are precious :)- hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:18:00 PM

    Andrea, congratulations ;-) In Harry's "goodbye" contest.. Good night~ PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:49:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:52:00 PM

    Memories are shadows cast by sun, I love that line.....congrats ......Seren

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:30:00 PM

    Beautifully written, Congrats Andrea... take care, Che

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:48:00 PM

    congrats Andrea on your 4th place winner in my goodbye sonnet contest

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 5:12:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 4:30:00 PM

    Magnificent Andrea! Congratulations on your win. I loved this one. I totally relate. Mahalo

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 3:33:00 AM

    straight from the heart with a tonality that makes me sway, andie.. congrats.. been absent from soup---allergy attack ( hot summer here) and tech problems.. i'm better now and will soupy later..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 9:29:00 PM

    Well done, Andrea, and the sentiment is universal... who has not wondered about long, lost friends? I liked the phrase, "cannot be retrieved" bang on. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 5:08:00 PM

    A precious poem of longing and memory congrats Andrea hugs vie

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 3:23:00 PM

    Special, dreamy..memorable as are YOU. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 8:04:00 AM

    Back to the hunt and glad to see you here Andrea. Says so much in these lines---you certainly have plenty of friends here!! Congrats dear friend, Craig

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 7:44:00 AM

    Andrea, sonnet queen, congrats on your win..super..David

  1. Date: 4/27/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Lovely Andrea! Congratulations on your win ...Samia

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 11:00:00 PM

    Ok...I am outta here.......

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 7:51:00 AM

    "for memories are shadows cast by sun" a key of this poem. you're just simply wonderful, girl! :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 9:15:00 AM

    You are always......G..E..N...I...U...S.... Memory is like sun light, that no one can delete from mind. In that light something desired may not come in to reality of life though shaded. Lovely Sonnet, loved always, my favorite poet, bl

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 12:46:00 PM

    The longing for yesteryear . Nice poem Andrea. love phyl soup mail

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 1:06:00 PM

    This brings back my 50th high school reunion. I almost didn't go, but, oh, would I have missed one of the best times of my life - to see all those old buddies. Now, rather than just think about them, I can communicate by e-mail. Love your sonnet and its fine sentiment. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 7:44:00 AM

    The bitter sweetness of nostagia. I found your words very moving Andrea.

  1. Date: 4/7/2012 6:47:00 AM

    lovely and thought provoking sonnet, andrea

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 10:26:00 PM

    Cute and nice.

  1. Date: 4/6/2012 2:32:00 PM

    Its a good and reflective write here Andrea,, just what the Dr ordered to put things in perspective;i will take these worthy sentiments on board,, and consider my friends as the ones who will be there, though the cuboard is bare, who will have me though maybe i've not enough hair.. Well i'm far from perfect ya'know..)

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